LightningLion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[To Help a Knocking Bird]

Very good for a first flash

Here's a tip. After the credits I just saw a white screen and the music kept playing. Add a replay button and a stopallsounds() code (if you want to stop the music) on the last frame. Other than that, there's really nothing I can say except nice job, and keep getting better at it :)

Galiant responds:

Thanks for the tip and the praise! Fixed that right up for ya =)

[Hide Your Change]

I wish this was longer!

I was really enjoying the animation style (particularly the head movement) and especially the style of dialogue. I just assumed a bum would show up instead of a stereotypical Jew. You should also add a play button so it doesn't loop over and over

Anoozi responds:

thank you! i have another episode which is like 5 mins long check it out on my page or on youtube at
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hUJdwE afz_8

[Tony Rough]

Not Bad

I liked where he played Rebecca Black's "Friday" (piece-o-shit) to mess with the guards.
Here's a tip tho: when you use music, be sure to crop it with another software, because if you just crop it in Flash, it'll still use the whole file size in the movie (It took me a while to figure this out, so no biggie).

Rafiles responds:

Thanks for the tip! first time i used sounds and music in flash and it really killed me. after lots of tries it still went wrong:O tip are always welcome!

[Wheelin' Across the World]

Things wrong with this movie:

Drawings weren't very good
Motions were choppy
If you're gonna use music, crop the part you're actually gonna use with a sound editing software so it doesn't keep playing after the end and then the flash file will be smaller. I recommend 64 kbps on export settings for the flash.
If you're gonna use jpegs, dumb down the quality so the flash file will be smaller.
And don't give the viewers epileptic seizures before the movie even starts.

Themindofamaniac responds:

Ight

[Teh Annoying Orange]

I kinda like where you're going with this...

...but you should make the story longer (and maybe less offensive to americans, I'm not sure). That's a common problem with new submissions is that they're too short. You animated the faces pretty well though, I'll give you that.

W-P-S responds:

:D :D :D

[Lazer Cat Episode 1]

Well Done!

love the fbf, and how the details were very precise at certain points (like the ice cream, for example) interesting concept, although it'd be cool if lazercat had other types of lazers like a freeze lazer or something (i dunno, maybe). Maybe you could add more colors on the next one (emphasis on MAYBE, cuz it still looked good black and white and i don't know if colors would mess up the feel of the drawings or make it better)

Very Refreshing : 5/5

Shadorath responds:

hmmm... ice lazers... sounds kinda fun, maybe, who knows what deep dark secrets that feline has!

[YEAH!!!!]

Uh, wow...

I didn't realize you could kickflip (or heelflip, I couldn't tell, it was too fast) without having the back foot on the tail

IronGuy responds:

well i can bcuz i have skills biatch!